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Six Sentence Sunday: Apple of My Eye

05/06/12

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Six Sentence Sunday: Apple of My Eye

Book: Apple of My Eye
Author: Liz Botts
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Apple of My EyeCaleb pulled up a friendly grin he didn’t quite feel after a long day out on the range. A long, hot shower sure sounded good right about now. Still, he was in charge here, so he ambled across the short span between the barn and the cars. As he rounded the car, his breath caught. Not only was the visitor a woman, but a woman he recognized. A woman he never thought he would see again.

 

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6 comments

Comment from: Jenny Hickman [Visitor] · http://moving-foreword.com
I wonder who she is! :) Great six.
05/06/12 @ 09:39
Comment from: christine warner [Visitor] · http://christine-warner.com
Intriguing six...very nicely written :)
05/06/12 @ 10:32
Comment from: Patricia Preston [Visitor] · http://www.patricia-preston.blogspot.com
Love the last line!
05/06/12 @ 10:36
Comment from: Lindsay [Visitor]
Wonder if him seeing her is good or bad
05/06/12 @ 11:38
Comment from: Goran Zidar [Visitor] · http://gzidar.wordpress.com
Ohh... who is she? Interesting (and teasing) way to finish the six. Thanks for sharing.
05/06/12 @ 23:45
Comment from: Elin Gregory [Visitor] · http://elingregory.wordpress.com
Nicely done. You've made Caleb a sympathetic character even in those few short sentences.
05/07/12 @ 07:43

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